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06.08.2020: From Soldiers, I Flee

  • Writer: Tay Moe
    Tay Moe
  • Jun 8, 2020
  • 2 min read

Updated: Jan 24, 2024

From Soldiers, I Flee


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying

I can’t see the birds through thick fog

Screams echos in the vast flourish fields

Voices of families torn apart in the mist


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying

Those that tortured pierce through my heart

Bones laying in a frightened state

I hold on tightly to every hand I can


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying

My body running, my eyes turn back

Houses scream out burning fire

Animals scattered to ashes of dust


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying

Branches, leaves, and bamboo all graze me

Through the jungle of deep unknown

My feet cautiously outrun the ground


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying

Among the strangers, I holler tears

My mind clouded by sorrows

Must move forward no matter what


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying

Sunsets and sunrises are uncountable

Hungar and fright consume all of me

Crossing the river, how close am I


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying

Finally, I see the gate

A relief rushes to welcome me

But traces of echo replay


The stomp of soldiers’ footsteps

The bullets going through the crowd

The blood of fresh bodies laying


By Tay M.

Background: The poem depicts a girl fleeing from the moment she sees the Burmese soldiers, to the moment she sees the refugee camp. Throughout her journey, there are three lines of the poem that serve as a constant replay of an image. The poem begins in the middle of chaos when the Burmese came into her village. She is then forced to run into the jungle with strangers. She follows the crowd while experiencing hard conditions. Finally, she sees the refugee camp but her journey remains a mystery. The poem depicts brutal imagery, but many had to cope and live with it. This is a young girl and her story.





2 Comments


Kate Carpenter
Kate Carpenter
Jun 22, 2020

I love how frank this one is. That and the repetition make it a very powerful and effective poem. The word choice and phrasing are superb!

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lhayes716
Jun 08, 2020

Excellent form creating a tremendous impact on the senses. Bravo! Praise God for your gift of writing!!

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